The Story of Edgar Sawtelle: A Novel by
David Wroblewskirating: 4 of 5 stars
I don’t like reading reviews of books before I read them. Usually, I will pick up on the “buzz” surrounding a book (positive or negative) and that will tend to inform whether or not I’m interested in reading it (if I’m on the fence in the first place). This isn’t a hard-and-fast rule: I’ve read lots of books after having my interest piqued by reading a review. On the whole, though, I feel that reviews tend to give away too much information – plot or other – that is best discovered between the pages. Once I FINISH a book, I tend to go back and devour all the reviews I can find. Maybe I’m worried about not fitting in with the prevailing critical stance (doubtful), but more likely I just tend to want to know what others think.
The Story of Edgar Sawtelle is just such a book: as soon as I was done, I needed to know what other people thought – partly to clarify my own thinking, partly out of abject curiosity. This is a strange book, for certain, and it’s all the more strange (to me) that Oprah
picked it for her book club and that it has such high-profile cheerleaders (Steven King and Richard Russo et al). This is also a perfect example of a book that, had I read any reviews, I would have absolutely felt cheated out of lots of surprises. What I’m saying is, don’t read this “review” until you are 1) finished with this book, 2) don’t ever care to read this book, or 3) simply don’t care to experience the thrill of discovery in a book you read (who am I to judge?).
There’s just no good way to discuss this book without spoiling lots and lots of plot/character elements. That said, here goes.
Part of the reason I wanted to read reviews and opinions of
Edgar Sawtelle was that I was not – am not – completely sure how much I liked it. In this sense, I was reassured by reading some similar thoughts to mine: I felt like the first 2/3s or so of the book FLEW by, and I was utterly engrossed. The last 1/3...there’s where it gets tricky. (This is your last chance to bail out, if you don’t want spoilers...for real...)
About 2/3rds of the way through the story, Edgar and three of his dogs run away

from home and wander through the wilds of Wisconsin for an extended period of time –
about 100 pages. And while I understand why this took place in the context of the plot and what Edgar accomplished during the sojourn, it was overlong and eventually became dull. It reminded me (sorry, everyone) of the extended section of the last Harry Potter book, when our three intrepid young heroes camp out, doing essentially nothing, for what seems like an eternity (again, probably just about 100 pgs). This section of
Sawtelle had the same feeling: it moved the action away from everything that was captivating and slammed the brakes on a thrilling experience. Away from his family and circumstances, Edgar the character gains some measure of clarity, but for the reader it’s a pyrrhic victory. Away from his family and circumstances, Edgar the protagonist isn’t as interesting. It was just an unsatisfying section that allowed some of my precious attention to bleed away. Edgar’s homecoming, having had such a long buildup, doesn’t then pack enough of an emotional wallop. The ending felt overwrought and manic after such a deliberately paced 500-or-so pages. The ending just felt like it was working too hard, honestly. Now, the whole thing was written in a lovely style, with a realistic yet subtly mystical feeling to it; the entire book was extremely readable. But it lost part of me towards the end; I wanted desperately to stay engaged, while my fascination slowly dissipated. Yet the first 400 pages were thrilling, incredible – I couldn’t put it down! It makes the frustration I felt at the end all the more…well, frustrating.
A second problem, one which ties in with the problem above, is

that the book is purely a reimagining of
Hamlet (by William Shakespeare? Heard of it?). Again, this is another thing you wouldn’t want to know before starting the book (I warned you), but after Edgar’s father dies mysteriously, Edgar’s truant uncle (CLAUDE) starts spending a lot of time around Edgar’s mom (TRUDY), and Edgar’s dad re-appears to Edgar as a GHOST…well, it becomes pretty clear. Now there is nothing inherently wrong with retelling
Hamlet on a dog farm in Wisconsin in the early 1970s. I’m cool with that in theory. But once you realize that superstructure, it’s tough not to read the remainder AS
Hamlet – focusing on the parallels, waiting for the next plotpoint. Part of the reason the section described above – Edgar’s journey into the wilderness – is sort of interminable is that the
Hamlet analogue – Hamlet’s abortive escape from Denmark to England – is unseen in the play while being lengthily portrayed in the novel. I wanted Edgar to be similarly thwarted by pirates, or whatever the 1970s Wisconsin forest equivalent would be, and to get back to Denmark---I mean the Sawtelle barn---so he could get on with it. The book’s plot hews so closely to the plot of
Hamlet – most preposterously in the “re-enactment” of the murder of Edgar’s father (aka the king of denmark) to provoke Claude (Claudius) – that the novel starts to creak and strain in places under the burden.
Yet the most interesting parts of the book find no analogue (as far as I know) in the play. All the remarkable material about the training of dogs; the careful, intuitive breeding of dogs – with an entrancing whiff of mysticism; the history of the Sawtelle dogs; the evolution of the “next dog;” the Sawtelle family history; the aged seer who operates the town grocery; Edgar’s largely self-invented sign language…all kinds of good stuff. The characters themselves are fascinating, too, and I would have loved to know them better instead of running away from them for a healthy chunk of time towards the end of the book. I wish we would have delved further into the dog breeding and training and evolution, while not feeling so chained to the plot of the most famous play in the world. This isn’t a criticism necessarily (“If I had written this book it would just be about the dogs and everybody would LIVE in the end!!!”), just a personal preference. (Less Glen Papineau = Laertes, more about the supercool, mysterious breeding of the humanistic Sawtelle Dogs!)

At the same time, though, I actually felt like this book gave me a ton of insight into
Hamlet in a strange way. Surely this was not Dave Wroblewski’s intention in basing his novel on that play, but seeing a weird, American kid as The Melancholy Dane strangely made the characters and motivations in the original play somewhat more understandable. Just seeing those somewhat inscrutable, complex characters and situations in a different, somewhat contemporary light was illuminating. (This is neither here nor there, but it was interesting to me to realize. Anyway. FYI.)
At any rate, this is a book that the “half-star” rating was INVENTED for. I really enjoyed the vast majority of
The Story of Edgar Sawtelle. While I have my quibbles, it was still an engrossing, enjoyable work of fiction. At its best, it transported you to a quiet, mystical world not unlike our own, and at worst it was totally readable, so I will give it 4 stars, technically. If the ending hadn’t felt quite so strained and convoluted, and Edgar’s harrowing journey in the wild had cohered better with the rest of the book, it would have been unstoppable. This is a 3½-star book – perfectly situated between “good” and “very good.”